Question

【题目】假如你是李华。某英文报社正在举行主题未“周日关闭智能手机”的活动，你很感兴趣。请你用英文给此报社发一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表明愿意参加活动，并给出原因；

2. 关闭手机后，你准备在本周日安排哪些活动；

3. 表示会向同学们介绍此项活动。

注意：

1. 词数100--120；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam:

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones. I’m very glad to join in the activity. Smartphones are playing an important role nowadays, making it easier for us to communicate with others and deal with work. But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of the face-to-face communication.

I will present my plans for this Sunday here. After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a morning run in the park. At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the latest movie together. In the evening, we will stay at home, reading books.

It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to recommend it to my classmates.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英文报社发一封电子邮件。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 表明愿意参加活动，并给出原因；

2. 关闭手机后，你准备在本周日安排哪些活动；

3. 表示会向同学们介绍此项活动。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

be pleased to；appeal to；be glad to；join in；communicate with；look forward to

第三步: 连词成句

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones.

Smartphones are playing an important role nowadays, making it easier for us to communicate with others and deal with work.

But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of the face-to-face communication.

After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a morning run in the park.

At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the latest movie together.

In the evening, we will stay at home, reading books.

It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to recommend it to my classmates.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改