Question

1．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．
有的人认为多给予孩子表扬和鼓励有助于他们的成长，有的人则相信及时指出孩子的缺点并适当惩罚能帮助他们改正错误．你支持哪一种教育方式，请谈谈你的看法和理由．
One possible version：
The famous Chinese saying that it's the partents'fault if the child is not well taught indicates that family plays a very important role in children's growth．While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence on people．（高分句型一）Both sayings are ok，but in my point of view，family has the most important infulence on young adults．
It is obvious that famliy plays an important role in our life．As young adults are not yet independent，mostly they live with their families and then inevitably they have a subtle influence on young adults'character．Adolescence is a vital period of one's life．Many people form their character and outlook on life in their youth．Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．（高分句型二）
On the whole，compared with their peers，family is more important to teenagers．Parents must provide the best environment and behave themselves better．Parents can only give good advice and put them on right roads，and the final forming of their charcter lies in their own hands．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．然而另一个习语说物以类聚，这一说法证明朋友对人们的影响是非常大的．
高分句型二：
Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．
没有父母的正确引导和影响，孩子很容易误入歧途．
句型一 which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．该句是一个由which作关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句，其在定语从句中作主语且替代前面提到的整个句子的内容．
句型二 ①该句中使用了表否定的介词without ②it's easy for children to go bad．该句型为常用的it 作形式主语 用不定式作真正的主语的句型，该句型的正确使用说明学生对该部分语法掌握良好．

解答 One possible version：
     The famous Chinese saying that it's the partents'fault if the child is not well taught indicates that family plays a very important role in children's growth．While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．（高分句型一）Both sayings are ok，but in my point of view，family has the most important infulence on young adults．
    It is obvious that famliy plays an important role in our life．As young adults are not yet independent，mostly they live with their families and then inevitably they have a subtle influence on young adults'character．Adolescence is a vital period of one's life．Many people form their character and outlook on life in their youth．Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．（高分句型二）
    On the whole，compared with their peers，family is more important to teenagers．Parents must provide the best environment and behave themselves better．Parents can only give good advice and put them on right roads，and the final forming of their charcter lies in their own hands．

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