Question

你平时在餐厅就餐时发现不少同学在饮食方面存在很不好的习惯，这直接影响着他们的健康。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，刊登在校报上。
现象：一些同学没有意识到饮食和健康的关系，饮食不科学，常吃一些含热量和脂肪过高的食品。 后果：一些同学开始发胖，没精力学习。
建议：大家要意识到健康饮食的重要性，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做运动。
注意：1.要写成一篇完整的短文，不要直译。      2．120词左右。
3. be rich in… 含…丰富的，     calories 热量

Answer 1

Recently，when eating in the dining hall，I found that some students hadn’t realized the link between diet and good health and they didn’t eat healthy food. They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat. As a result，they often feel too weak to take their lessons energetically. So this affects not only their study but also their health.
Therefore，it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the right kinds of food and eat healthily. We should have more vegetables，more fruits and less meat. Moreover，we should also take enough exercise so that we can keep our body strong

解析试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，话题是不少同学在饮食方面存在很不好的习惯，从而对健康造成危害，文字提示里所出了要点，考生可以翻译，并且做适当的发挥，在写作的过程中，一定要注意使用合适的连接词来连接全文如Therefore，Moreover，As a result等；让文章成为一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和高级句型提升问的文采和层次。They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat.这是个非限制性定语从句it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the right kinds这是it做形式主语的句型。
考点：考查提纲类作文
点评：提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略。本文所给要点很全，不需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。