Question

假设你是吉林希望中学学生刘洋，得知2013年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请用英语写一封自荐信，主要包括：
1. 个人信息：男，18岁，高三学生
2. 性格、爱好与特长
3. 学习情况
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头已为你写好 (不计入总词数)；
3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4. 参考词汇：自主招生 independent recruitment
Dear Sir，
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jilin.                       
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Yours sincerely，
Liu Yang

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jilin. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.
I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy－going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Liu Yang

试题分析：本文考查了自荐信，介绍自己的具体情况。审题时注意使用一般现在时，以第一人称为主。写作时注意语法结构和词汇搭配。要尽量使用高级的词汇和高级的句型让文章更有层次，同时使用合适的连接词让各要点连接成流畅的短文，注意标点符号的使用。
点评：本文的要点都已经给出，只要简单翻译即可，要求考生注意审题中的人称和试题，注意写作的细节如语法结构和标点符号，注意使用连接词和高级词汇词组，让文章更有层次和文采。