Question

阅读下面短文, 按任务写作的要求以约30个词概括文章的主要内容。
Teenagers’ secrets should be kept to themselves and no one else, their parents included, has the right to stick their nose into their private life.
As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically(心理上). They are curious about and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their body and mind. What’s more, exposed to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin following the example of adults’ behaviors in secret. Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair and care more about what to wear. Some even begin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without letting their parents know. They are doing all this in secret because they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that, if found out by their parent, they will get misunderstood and even punished. In fact, in many cases, parents can not deal with such matters well but hurt their children’s feelings badly, making children unwilling to communicate with them any more. When this happens, it terribly hurts feelings of the family as well.
Therefore, it sounds reasonable and acceptable that teenagers should keep their secrets to themselves instead of sharing them with their parents, who should give them the freedom in dealing with secrets.

Answer 1

Many teenagers have their own secrets, but their parents always can’t deal with them well, which will probably hurt feelings of children and their family. Actually, teenagers should have their own secrets rather than share them with their parents. (40w)

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作的一部分，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，不能用文章的原句。
【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，使用了词组：deal with 处理，rather than而不是， share sb. with和…分享。Many teenagers have their own secrets, but their parents always can’t deal with them well, which will probably hurt feelings of children and their family.这句话使用了定语从句。
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