Question

11．Suppose you are Li Hua．Your friend Mike wrote you a letter，complaining about his conflicts with his parents．Mike's parents stress the merits（价值，优点） of"Chinese parenting"，which means high expectations，strict discipline （such as no TV or computer games），and punishment instead of encouragement．They believe such strict parenting is good for the growth of children，but Mike thinks otherwise．Which view do you agree with？Write him a letter and your letter should include：
1．Your opinion and the reasons in support of it．
2．Some advice on Mike's conflicts with his parents．
词数：100词左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文描述了Mike父母对于孩子过严的要求和过高的期望期望，考生要围绕这一话题来写作．提出自己的看法，父母这样做是好是坏以及给Mike的建议．同时考生还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般现在时为主，除此以外，写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型．最后注意以书信形式写作．
重要短语：
  have high expectations on，对…有很高期待，be willing to do，乐意做，have negative effect on 对…有消极影响．
高分句子：
1．Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．本句前半句为现在分词做状语，后半句no wonder 加句子，意为难怪…
2．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．本句中含有when引导的时间状语从句，且从句中又包含that 引导的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Mike：
     I am so sorry to hear that you have conflicts with your parents．
     However，there are too many parents who have high expectations on their kids and are willing to do everything possible as long as their kids have bright future like your parents．（描述情况）Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．（高分句型）They lay great hope on us and want us to be strong enough to face vavious challenges．We fully understand and respect their feelings．However，if the expectations are high beyond our ability，it is a kind of heavy pressure on us．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．（高分句型）As a result，it will have negative effect on our study and life．（提出观点）
     In my opinion，you ought to say to your parents that you are sure to do your utmost and not to let them down through hard working，please don't give you too much pressure and make you relaxed．Tell that you need them encouragement constantly so that you will have more confidence to do things better．（提出建议）
                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 在完成半开放作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体．