Question

【题目】假设你是李华,于2016年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。

信件要点包括:

1.陈述写信原因

2.简要描述该行李

3.说明其重要性

4.期待回复并表示感谢

注意:

1.词数100左右。

2.信件格式已为你给出。

3.请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a passenger on the flight number BA793 of your airline company. I took the flight from the abroad on June 3,2016. Unfortunately, I found one of my suitcases lost at the airport. Here I am eagerly writing to you for help to find my lost suitcase.

The suitcase is a black mid-sized one, 80 cm long, 40 cm wide and 25 cm thick, with my name tagged on the handle. Because it contains many important personal files and some scientific material and some academic reference books collected when I studied abroad for further research in my field. It took me much time and energy to get them and they are valuable in my scientific study. Besides, there are some presents I bought for my family members and friends, it will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find the suitcase.

Here I sincerely express my appreciation if you could help find the lost suitcase, and I’m looking forward to bearing good news from you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达要求给航空公司写信，请他们帮助寻找行李箱。书信是同学们熟悉的写作体裁，这使得文章的写作更加容易。在写作前要确定文章的时态和人称，根据本文要求可以判断应该用第一人称，主时态应该用一般现在时，描述发生的事情用一般过去时。写作要点必须至少包括以下要点中的四项：1.陈述写信原因。2.简要描述该行李。3.说明其重要性。4.期待回复并表示感谢。注意在写作时需用适当表示顺序的词来进行上下文的衔接，以增加文章的可读性和层次性。此外，还要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式来提高文章档次。

写作亮点：范文条理清楚，要点齐全，结构连贯。句式变化多样，文章生动而流畅，体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：I’m Li Hua, a passenger on the flight number BA793 of your airline company.同位语的使用让句子清楚明了；The suitcase is a black mid-sized one, 80 cm long, 40 cm wide and 25 cm thick, with my name tagged on the handle.修饰语多样化，描述具体；Because it contains many important personal files and some scientific material and some academic reference books collected when I studied abroad for further research in my field.原因和时间状语从句的使用增强了句子的可读性；Besides, there are some presents I bought for my family members and friends, it will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find the suitcase.使用了高级语法定语从句和状语从句。