Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
Sorry to learn that you've put on weight. Eat too much food in McDonald's and KFC must be the reason, I guess.
You have to realize that food is not always as healthy as was said in the advertisements. If you know much about them, we will find fried chicken and French fries are rich in fat, sugar and salt. They can make you to gain weight and become sick.
That you ought to have every day are noodles, rice, fruit and vegetables rather than the junk food. Energy-giving food, body-building food and protective food makes up a balanced diet. In word, you must have an idea of how a healthy diet should be and stick to it.
I hope my advices can help you improve your health.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】①eat改为eating②was改为is③much改为more④we改为you⑤make的用法去掉to⑥that改为what⑦makes改为make⑧在in后加a⑨how改为what⑩advices改为advice

【解析】（1）考查动名词。由句子剩余部分：must be the reason，可知这里缺少主语成分，动词作名词要加“ing”变为动名词形式，故要将eat改为eating。

（2）考查时态。文章整体以一般现在时态呈现，这里使用一般过去时十分突兀并且在这里没有理由使用一般过去时，故要将was改为is。

（3）考查比较级。more是much的比较级表示更多。此处表示如果你对它们了解的更多的话，你会发现炸鸡和薯条含油脂，糖以及盐非常多，故要将much改为more。

（4）考查主语。因为主句和从句的主语要一致，故要将we改为you。

（5）考查固定用法。make的用法是make+sb.+do+sth.，所以要去掉助动词to。

（6）考查宾语从句。动词have之后缺少宾语，所以要使用疑问代词what放在句子开头引导宾语从句，故要将that改为what。

（7）考查动词原形。food虽然为不可数名词，但在此处罗列了三种种类的食物,所以主语是这三种种类的食物而不只是食物，因此要使用动词原形，故要将makes改为make。

（8）考查固定词组。in a word是固定词组，表示总而言之，故要在in后加a。

（9）考查宾语从句。从句should be后缺少宾语，所以要使用what引导宾语从句，故要将how改为what。

（10）考查不可数名词。advice为建议的意思，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故要将advices改为advice。