Question

【题目】假如你是李华，高二生活快要结束，高三生活即将开始。同学多年，友情弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信，要点如下：

1.写信目的

2.你们之间难忘的事情

3.再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语及结尾已为你写好， 不计入词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mrs Zhang,

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.

With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, as my headteacher, you asked me to go to your office.

Instead of blaming me, you comforted me and discussed with me the reasons for my failing in the exam. More unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the exam.

Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. Wish you happiness and good health.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，话题是给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in low spirits，because of，on the point of，from time to time，adjust to；还运用句型：You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.这句运定语从句，With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance.这句话运用了非谓语动词；Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope.这句话运用了名词性从句和定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如with，when，as等等。