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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum made the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."
The picture of my coach enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter was my favorite one taken  at the party.

分析 短文大意:文章介绍了作者的教练退休了,在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干.教练非常高兴.

解答 My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.
My mum made the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.
Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.
I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor afterI was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,
"I might have to retire again next year just∧get some more of these biscuits."
The picture of my coach enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter was my favorite one taken at the party.
1.去掉in 介词误用.以last开头的时间短语作状语是前面不加介词,类似的还有last week,next week,this week等之前不需要任何介词.
2.anything改为something 不定代词误用."一些事情"在肯定句中用something,本句话要表达的意思是"我想为教练做点什么特别的事情",而不是任何事情.因此要把anything改为something.
3.better改为best 最高级误用.the应用在形容词的最高级前,本句话要表达的意思是"妈妈做的饼干是世界上最好的",此处应用最高级.因此要把better改为best.
4.decide改为decided 时态用错.通过整体分析,全文是回忆过去的一件事,用一般过去时.
5.step改为steps 名词单复数用错.some后面加可数名词复数.some basic steps意思是"一些基本的步骤",step是可数名词,因此此处用steps.
6.well改为good  形容词误用.应该用形容词作表语,well作形容词表示"身体好,健康的".
7.after改为when/while 连词误用.此处意为"当…时候".本句话所要表达的意思是"在打包的时候掉了一些饼干",因此把after改成when/while.
8.a改为the 冠词误用.此处特指"那次晚会",应该用定冠词the.
9.在get前面加to 漏用不定式符号to.此处用不定式作状语表目的.本句话所要表达的意思是"我可能明年要在退休一次,只是想得到更多这样的饼干".
10.enjoy改为enjoying 非谓语动词误用.根据介词of,应用动名词enjoying,my coachand me是enjoying的逻辑主语,因此要把enjoy改为enjoying.

点评 本题是短文改错.短文改错是高考重要的题型之一,它注重考查考生综合应用英语语言及语法知识的能力,要求考生平时对一些重点语法及语言知识熟练掌握,做题时要先通读全文,了解大意,在此基础上结合所学知识作出判断.

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