Question

17．如图是公共场所常见的情景．请根据图片和文字的提示，以The Furthest Distance为题，写一篇英文文章，向学校英文杂志社投稿!
The furthest distance in the world is not between life and death，
but while I am with you yet you…
你的文章应：
1、结合图与文字阐明其折射出的社会现象；
2、简要分析这种现象的后果；
3、包含你对如何改变这种现象的建议．
参考词汇：3G时代the 3G era
注意：
1、可根据题意将图下英文句子补充完整并合理应用：
2、作文词数150左右；
3、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
4、开头已写好，不计入总词数．
The Furthest Distance
As demonstrated in the above picture，      ．

Answer 1

分析 本题为图画类作文．
认真观察图画，可以看到每个人都在低头玩手机．
写作要点为：1，描述图画内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议．

解答 As is demonstrated in the above picture，everyone in public places like the subway is absorbed in the tiny magical screen in hand，texting，reading or watching videos，totally ignoring those around them．This picture，together with the sentence below it，indicates the phenomenon that we prefer to lose ourselves in the virtual world than communicate with real world people around US．   
Great attention should be paid to the negative effects of this phenomenon．Apparently it reduces opportunities f face-to-face communication．Consequently，people become more and more distant from each other．Just as the saying goes，the furthest distance in the world is not between life and death，but while I am with you yet you are buried in your phone．It's time we put aside our mobile phones，iPads or what ever for a while．Begin with a smile，and then say hi to the one who is next to you and carry out a casual small talk．

点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．