Question

近来你们学校正准备创建和申报“省绿色学校”请你据此给某英文报写一篇短文

内容包括 ※建设绿色校园的重要性……

※绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……

※为了建设绿色校园我们应该……

注意 1、词数100左右2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3、开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school?

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a "green" atmosphere for our study and life.

For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude towards each other.

Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we'll surely turn our school into a better one.

【解析】

试题分析：打造文章之骨架审好题，立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是句子或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。本文的首句已给出，必须接好第二句，使上下文流畅。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门是需要长时间累积的。