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Dear editors:
I am Li Hua from Class Ten Senior One of Yaohua Middle School. My opinions about the textbook are as follows:
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I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Please contact me at 0750¡ª567890 or Lihua1995@yahoo.com
Best wishes!
Li Hua

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First of all, what is good about the textbook is that it covers various subjects such as culture, history, geography and modern science and technology. But there are too many attributive clauses crowded in one passage, which does not seem natural. Besides, some of the sentences are too complicated to understand. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to say that the basic and simple sentence structures should come before the compound clauses in the aspect of grammar starting from easy level. At the same time, there should be more reading materials related to the topic of each unit.
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I¡¯m glad to learn part-time tutors are wanted in your training school for the coming summer camp and I¡¯d like to have a try.
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