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第二节  短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（  ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then

she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his

T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop

as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\asturned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,      

for I just thought it was funny!

But/yet/while/and

Answer 1

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then

                             were

she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his

                     it          the                                        her

T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop

                 Hard                                         to

as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\asturned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,

which                                                 embarrassed          

for I just thought it was funny!

But/yet/while/and

解析:

were 根据文章开头saw可知are应该改成过去形式were。

pick up是及物动词短语，所以要加上宾语it，即a cup。

the 这里指的是杯子的价格，是看特定东西的价格，所以用定冠词。

her 物主代词用错，前面提到的是she，所以后面就应该用her。

hard  hardly表示几乎不，而hard在这里意为“尽力地”。

加上to  want后接动词时需加to，即want to do。

去掉was  turn out是不及物动词短语。

which引导非限制性定语从句，充当left的宾语，that不可引导非限制性定语从句。

embarrassed embarrassing指事物本身令人窘迫，而这里指助手assistant感到难为情，所以用embarrassed。

but/yet/while/and 根据前面一句难为情，后文说很有趣，所以两者是相反的或者说承接前文所说的，但不是原因。