Question

下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。

注意：

1. 短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容, 短文的内容要连贯、完整；

2. 词数：100左右。

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Answer 1

One morning, Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water, Li Ming did not know why.

The next morning on his way to school, Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free. When he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds are friends!” To his delight, his grandpa agreed.

The bird was set free. Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据图片提供的信息，以第三人称写一篇英语短文，介绍李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的过程。作文必须包含四幅图上的所有内容，并保持语意连贯、衔接紧凑。词数在100词左右；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了让步状语从句、时间状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：让步状语从句though it had enough food and water；时间状语从句When he got home等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用one morning, and, then, to his delight等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了on one’s way to, think of, persuade sb to do, set...free, say to sb, to one’s delight, fly away等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：看图作文