Question

【题目】书面表达 (满分25分)

请你根据对右面这幅漫画的理解，以Come Back to Reality为题，用英语写一篇作文。

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要描述漫画的内容。

2. 概述你对这幅图的理解。

3. 举例说明你会怎样做。

注意：

1. 可参照漫画适当发挥。

2. 作文词数150左右。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Come Back to Reality

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Answer 1

【答案】

Come Back to Reality

As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of the computer and trying to add more friends to her facebook. Just outside the door, some people are eagerly watching her, hoping to make friends with her.

This picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts. They lose themselves in the virtual world and if it continues, they will eventually be cut off from reality. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for us to go too far. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet can lead to a disaster, mentally and physically. The real world that we live in is what counts.

As for myself, I'll devote myself to worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to my studies. Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面属于看图作文，根据图示内容来写一篇文章。首先要描述漫画的内容，然后说出你的理解，最后举例说明你会怎么做。写作时注意以下几点：1、注意审题，仔细看图，弄清图片提供的信息，明确要点。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如As is shown非限制性定语从句，There is no doubt that同谓语从句，Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.only引导的倒装结构。此外，文章还使用了大量短语和句型，如in front of在...前面remind of想起，cut off切除， devote to致力于，As for myself对于我来说。