Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to men. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”

Answer 1

1.I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never 改成：courses

2.pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours改成：because

3.a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never改成：looking

4.see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. 改成：“I （去掉was）

5.can’t see everything, ” I said. 改成： Anything

6.Then he began patient enough to explain改成：patiently

7.how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to men. 改成： man

8. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” 改成：To

9.professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he改成：didn't

10.shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!” 改成：looked

【解析】

1. other“整体中除了…剩下的”是一个复数集合，后面接复数。所以填curses。

考点：考察指示代词的单复数含义。

2. reason why”与 “this is because”是两个固定搭配，”the reason why”why是一个形容词副词，引导一个定语从句，“this is because”是一个表语从句，this是主语，is是系动词，is后面的就是表语。两个都表示某某的原因。

考点：考察固定搭配。

3. sometimes in doing sth“花一些时间做某事”。所以look应该用现在分词形式looking。

考点：考察spen sometimes in doing sth d的用法。

4. used to do sth“习惯于做某事。并且是指过去习惯于做某事”Used to“惯于、经常”这里是说因为作者不能从显微镜里面看到植物的细胞，于是老师会经常生气。这里做经常讲，所以要去掉was。

考点：考察be used to do 与Used to的区别。

5. 陈述句中。”everything“所有事物，用于肯定句的陈述句中”此处是说，作者通过显微镜看不到任何事物。是一个否定陈述句，所以用anything。

考点：考察不定代词的用法。

6.

考点：考察副词的用法。

7.

考点：考察单复数的含义辨析。

8. pleasure“愉快的，乐意的”，to ones pleasure“令…开心的”这两个搭配是固定的，没有with ones pleasure之说。令我感到开心的是，我看到了一些东西并迅速的把他画出来了。考察短语实意辨析。

9. what I saw.可以确定时态为过去式。所以教授回答作者的时候应该也是过去式。所以用didn't。

考点：考察时态辨析

10.

考点：考查考察and连接的两个复合句和谓语时态。