Question

【题目】假设你是王明，近日，英语协会与校学生会联合发起了“强健身体，从我做起”的活动，作为学生会主席，请你就此写一封英文倡议书发表在校报上，号召大家锻炼身体，保持健康。

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Answer 1

【答案】Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work.

However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves when participating in sports activities. What’s more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.

All in all, sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议书。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封倡议书；假设你是王明，近日，英语协会与校学生会联合发起了“强健身体，从我做起”的活动，作为学生会主席，就此写一封英文倡议书发表在校报上，号召大家锻炼身体，保持健康。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：do sb. good（对……有好处），take exercises（锻炼），build up our physical strength（强健我们的身体），the importance of cooperation（合作的重要性），take part in（参加），competitive spirit（竞争精神），relax（放松）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如时间状语从句及省略While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit.；We may hurt other players or ourselves when participating in sports activities.；主语从句It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength.；非谓语动词What’s more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外However，What’s more，All in all等词组的运用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。