Question

【题目】假如你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。 请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点: 1. 参加中文班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视;

3. 学唱中文歌; 4. 交中国朋友。

注意： 1. 词数不少于100; 2. 信的首尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是一篇书信类作文。写作的时候注意：仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。就本文而言，要注意以下四个要点：1. 参加中文班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌; 4. 交中国朋友。本文应该用一般现在时态；而且写作时注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，要点全面，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如原因状语从句as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 和because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily。此外，文章还使用了 First, Then, Besides, also等这样的关联词,使文章内容层次分明，也使内容更加连贯。