Question

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but everything seemed to go wrong with myself. Firstly, the weather was awful. It rained every day but it was terribly cold. The hotel which I stayed was noisy and dirty and also very expensive. During I was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. When I go to the police they said they couldn’t do anything about it.

Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday. This year I’m staying at the home!

 

Answer 1

1.amazed – amazing

2.myself– me

3.but– and

4.which– where / which前面加in

5.During–When

6.thing–things

7.go–went

8.Fortunate–Fortunately

9.pay后加for

10.去掉the

【解析】

试题分析：在本文中作者讲述了去年夏天去加拿大度假时的糟糕经历。天气糟糕，又下雨又冷，旅馆既吵闹又脏还很贵，作者丢了东西，警方也无能为力，幸好作者还有信用卡支付后来的费用。最后作者说今年打算呆在家里。

1.amazed – amazing考查形容词不同形式用法。小技巧：凡是－ed结尾的都是形容人的，表示“人感到……”，－ing结尾都是形容物的，表示“令人感到……”。此处修饰“place 地点”，所以要用amazing。故把amazed改为 amazing。

2.myself– me 考查介宾。……everything seemed to go wrong with myself.反身代词与它所指代名词或代词有互指关系，要在人称、性和数上保持一致。本句主语是 “everything”，与反身代词“myself”不是同一类，故此处不能用反身代词，要用宾格“me”。 故把myself改为 me。

3.but– and 考查连词辨析。It rained every day but it was terribly cold. “It rained every day 每天下雨”与 “it was terribly cold非常冷”存在意思顺承关系，要用连词and,并不存在转折关系，不能用but。故把but改为and。

4.which– where / which前面加in 考查定语从句的引导词。The hotel which I stayed was noisy and dirty and also very expensive.此句先行词是the hotel，定语从句I stayed中缺少的是地点状语，故用关系副词where来引导，而不是用关系代词which；又因为在定语从句中，介词+关系代词=关系副词这个公式，所以此处where = in which,故若要用which，前面要加in。故把which改为 where / which前面加in。

5.During–When 考查引导时间状语从句的连词用法。During I was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. During是介词，意为“在……期间”，后加时间段，不能将其误作时间状语从句I was out walking one day的连词；when在此为连词，意为“当……时候”， 引导时间状语从句I was out walking one day。故把During改为When。

6.thing–things考查名词复数。some other thing were stolen.“some 一些”，后若跟可数名词，要用可数名词的复数形式，故把thing改为things。

7.go–went考查动词时态。When I go to the police…… 由开头第一句“Last summer”及全文可知整篇文章都是用一般过去时，所以本句也要用一般过去时，故把go改为went。

8.Fortunate–Fortunately 考查副词用法。Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday. Fortunately副词，意为“幸运的是”，放在句首，是句子副词，用于修饰句子“I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday.”反映说话人的观点和看法。Fortunate 形容词，意为“幸运的”，不能修饰整个句子。故把Fortunate改为Fortunately。

9.pay后加for 考查动词短语固定搭配。……so I could pay the rest of my holiday.固定短语：pay for“为……而付钱”，故pay后加for。

10.去掉the 考查固定短语。This year I’m staying at the home!固定短语：stay at home “呆在家里”，故去掉the。

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