Question

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Patience is of great important in our daily life．Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take a next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

Answer 1

分析 本文描述了作者通过自己在停车点等公共汽车，没有耐心而错过该次班车的经历，体会到了有耐心在日常生活中的重要性．现在每次快要失去信心的时候，他都会想起这次经历．

解答 Patience is of great importantin our daily life．Once I waited∧a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take anext bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only thendoI realize my problem．Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have putit in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．
试题分析：
1． important 改为importance．考查固定句式．of great+n．=adj．所以用of great importance=important，表示"重要的"．
2．waited 和 a 之间加for．考查介词．wait不及物动词，wait for sb/sth 等待…所以应在waited 和 a 之间加for．
3．past改为passed．考查单词辨析．past 是介词，表示"经过，过去"，而此处缺少谓语故past→passed．
4．feet改成foot．考查固定短语．on foot固定词组，表示"步行"．
5．when改成than．考查固定句式．no sooner…than…固定用法，表示"一…就…"．
6．a 改成the．考查冠词．此处next bus应是特指下一辆车，故a→the．
7．other 改成another．考查不定代词．another+数字+复数名词=数字+more+复数名词，固定用法"再，又多少多少…"，本句里的数字在后，所以用another．
8．do 改成did．考查谓语动词的时态．本文描述的是过去的一次经历，应用一般过去事，因此do→did．
9．put后it去掉．考查定语从句．that引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，因此it多于，去掉．
10．lose改为losing．考查非谓语动词．本句中be close to 接近…to 是介词，因此lose→losing．

点评 考查短文改错．
to 既是动词不定式，也是介词，所以在一些短语里to后需要用名词后动名词，例如本题的be close to 的to 是介词，后面用doing．其他的还有lead to； contribute to； turn to；pay attention to 等等．平时学习时注意总结．