Question

第三部分写作(共两节,35分)

第一节短文改错(10分) (2013 •陕西)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地 方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ) ,并在其下面写 上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后 的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不 计分。

   My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

   One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.

Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

Answer 1

1. 第二句go改为went解析：由时间状语 one Sunday morning以及本篇文章的时态可

知用一般过去时。

2. 第三句ours改为our解析：形容词性物主 代词作定语，修饰fishing poles。

3. 第四句去掉so解析：从属连词as soon as 与并列连词so不能同时使用。

4. 第五句Before改为After 解析：由句意 可知。

5. 第五句 impatiently 改为 impatient 解析:get

是系动词，后接形容词作表语。

6. 第六句and改为but 解析：表示转折， 用 but。

7. 第七句were改为was解析：主语是a sudden pull , 谓语用单数形式。

8. 第七句and后加a解析：此处表示“一条 鱼”，用 a fish。

9. 第八句minute改为minutes 解析：few修饰可数名词复数。

10. 第九句Felt改为Feeling解析:feel与yve是主谓关系，因此用现在分词作状语。