Question

与私家车相比，自行车具有价格便宜、有益健康、有利环境等优点，是国际公认的环保代步工具。目前某英语报社正在开展一场题为“I Want to Cycle” 的征文比赛，你看了 “征稿启事”后深有感触。请你根据下面”征稿启事”提供的写作思路图写一篇英语短文。

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There are many advantages of cycling.

Answer 1

There are many advantages of cycling. I want to cycle whenever and wherever possible.

First of all, it is the cheapest way of travelling /traveling besides walking. When travelling / traveling by bicycle, we don’t have to buy expensive gas. What’s more, it causes far fewer troubles than a car, which also saves us a lot of money.

Secondly, cycling is especially good for one’s health. It’s really a kind of exercise to build up one’s body and to test one’s will. Every day I cycle to school instead of driving or taking a bus. Therefore, I have a better chance to get all the exercise I need.

Thirdly, cycling is also good for our environment. It’s less noisy and does not pollute the air.

In short, cycling is of great benefit to us. Let’s ride our bicycles every day.

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【解析】 这是一篇说明文写作。文章的大体写作方向和主要内容已通过图表方式给出。写作时要注意逻辑顺序和词汇的选择。，注意文章的连贯与句子的通顺。文章第二句“I want to cycle whenever and wherever possible.”我想尽可能地骑自行车，无论何时，无论何地。Whenever和wherever这两个词用的很好，很新颖。文章用First of all， Secondly，Thirdly来分别叙述骑自行车的好处，逻辑清晰，文章条理清楚。文章第二段第三句“What’s more”（另外），这一高级词的使用给文章增色不少。还有例如“instead of”（代替）、“ Therefore”（因此）等等，这些高级词汇的使用都提升了文章的档次。例外，文中的几个句型也用的特别好。如第二段最后一句“it causes far fewer troubles than a car, which also saves us a lot of money.”运用的一个比较级，用来说明自行车远比汽车出的事故少，还用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句来表示自行车能给我们省跟多钱。第三段第一句“cycling is especially good for one’s health.”，动名词做主语，时句式富于变化。总结：写作时要多用高级词汇，不要局限于简单句和常规词。句式要富于变化，结构要严谨，逻辑清楚，调理清晰。

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