Question

【题目】假定你是李华，请给在你校做交换生的美国朋友Eric写封邮件，邀请他参加你校组织的“拾荒慢跑(plogging)”公益活动。内容包括：

1.活动的时间、地点；

2.活动的内容：慢跑并捡拾路上的垃圾；

3.注意事项：准备垃圾袋。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

How is everything going? I am writing to invite you to attend an environmental protection activity held by our school, whose theme is plogging. And the detailed information is as follows.

To protect the environment and enrich students’ school life, this special activity will be held in the Zhongshan Park, from 9a.m to 11a.m next Wednesday. It is mainly about picking up garbage while jogging on the road. All applicants will be divided into 20 groups, and there are 5 students in each group. The first three groups that pick up garbage the most in the limited time will win the first prize. What’s more, all applicants should prepare their garbage bags for the plogging. I know you like running in the morning and you are concerned about the environment, so there is no doubt that you are the right people to sign up.

If you are interested, please reply to me before next Monday. I’m looking forward to your letter.

Yours,

LiHua.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请他参加你校组织的“拾荒慢跑(plogging)”公益活动。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分总法

要求：1. 活动的时间、地点；

2. 活动的内容：慢跑并捡拾路上的垃圾；

3. 注意事项：准备垃圾袋。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

invite sb.to do sth.；as follows；school life；pick up；divide into；there are；limited time；the first prize；what’s more；garbage bags；in the morning；be concerned about；sign up；look forward to等。

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to invite you to attend an environmental protection activity held by our school, whose theme is plogging.

2. To protect the environment and enrich students’ school life, this special activity will be held in the Zhongshan Park, from 9a.m to 11a.m next Wednesday.

3. It is mainly about picking up garbage while jogging on the road.

4. All applicants will be divided into 20 groups, and there are 5 students in each group.

5. The first three groups that pick up garbage the most in the limited time will win the first prize.

6. I know you like running in the morning and you are concerned about the environment, so there is no doubt that you are the right people to sign up.

7. If you are interested, please rely to me before next Monday.

8. I’m looking forward to your letter.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

and；what’s more；while；so；if等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改