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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday Li Lin, one of my classmates, and I go to a bookstore. At a counter we noticed that the foreigner was talking to a clerk, but the clerk didn’t understand how the foreigner said, So we went up to him and was asked if he needed help in English. After knowing what he real wanted, we took him to the counter which he was looking. He was interesting in Chinese folk music very much, We gave him some advices on what to choose. The foreigner picked some music tapes with your help. He gave his sincere thanks to us and left, satisfied and happily.

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【解析】1.根据Last Sunday可知句子用一般过去时态，故把go 改成 went。

2.句意：我们注意到一个外国人正在和店员谈话。此处表示泛指，故把the 改成 a。

3.句意：但是店员不明白外国人在说什么。此处是宾语从句，引导词即起引导作用同时又做宾语从句的宾语，故把how 改成 what。

4.句意：我们走上去问是否需要用英语帮忙。此处是并列的谓语动词，主动关系，故把was去掉。

5.副词修饰动词，故把real 改成 really。

6.句意：我们把他带到他正在找的柜台。固定词组：look for寻找，故在looking 后面加上 for。

7.句意：他对中国民歌非常感兴趣。故把interesting 改成 interested。

8.因为advice是不可数名词，故把advices 改成 advice。

9.句意：在我们的帮助下这位外国人挑选了一些音乐录音带。故把your 改成 our。

10.句意：感到满意和高兴。此处是形容词做伴随状语，故把happily 改成 happy。