Question

18．假设以下几幅图描绘的是Jim一天内所经历的事情，请根据前三幅图的顺序和内容，想象第四幅图可能的发展，写出一个涵盖所有图片内容并有完整结局的故事，向校刊"英语园地"投稿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：crutch（拐杖），give up one's seat（让座）

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序及所给内容要点用英文写一篇短文，介绍Jim在一天内经历的事情和他自身态度的变化．在写作时，以第三人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．
重要短语：go to play basketball （去打篮球）； rush hour （交通拥挤时间，上下班高峰时间）；selfish（自私的）；priority seats（优先座位）；give up（放弃）；pretend to do（假装做某事）；
                think twice（再三考虑）； however（然而）；hurt his ankle（伤了他的脚踝）；walk with a crutch（用拐杖走路）；reflect on （反省，回顾）．
高分句型：1．Jim is rather selfish，so he didn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats．
                 在这个句子中运用了动名词形式作介词about的宾语．
                 2．He hurt his ankle while playing basketball and he had to walk with a crutch，standing for long periods  painfully．
                  句中的while playing…是一种省略"主语+be动词"的做法，相当于从句"while he is playing basketball"．standing for long periods  painfully是现在分词短语作状语．
                 3．This experience  made Jim reflect on  his behavior in the morning．
                 本句中的made是使役动词，后面跟省to不定式，即make sb do sth．

解答 Jim is a high school student，and a classmate of mine．Last sunday he went to play basketball by bus．It was the rush hour and the bus was  crowded．Jim is rather selfish，so he didn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats（高分句型一）．Even when an elderly passenger was standing nearby，he didn't give up the seat and pretends not to notice them．（图1）
However，something that happened later changed him．He hurt his ankle while playing basketball and he had to walk with a crutch，standing for long periods painfully（高分句型二）（图2）．On the way back home，he was sad to find that he had to stand on the bus．Luckily，a girl in one of the priority seats noticed  him．She quickly stood up to give up her seat to Jim（图3）．This experience  made Jim reflect on  his behavior in the morning（高分句型三）．He thought he would never be selfish again!（图4．发挥想象）

点评 写好这类图表作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，运用所掌握的英语知识，围绕主题，提炼要点，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．