Question

【题目】短文写作

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

As Madam Curie put it , “I never see what has been done ;I only see what remains to be done .”

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右,如引用提示将不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

During my years of school life, what strikes me most is that I’ve learned to look at what I need to do in the future, rather being lost in what I’ve done before.

When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago with good grades, I was wild with joy, thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation before I acted up. Therefore, I found myself hanging around with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies. It didn’t take long before I realized that I fell behind sharply in my studies, sometimes even with my homework unfinished. Fully aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed, I began to catch up.

We tend be content with what we’ve achieved, forgetting all about our road ahead, which may actually put us at a disadvantage. Only when we keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章是一个半开放性议论文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、议论性文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文用到了从句，with复合结构，It句型，非谓语等高难度语法 2.使用了in the future,be admitted into,act up,find oneself doing,等词组 3.文章观点鲜明，能够根据题干所给的俗语结合自己，阐释自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰，使用了therefore等连接词，行文流畅。在考场上可谓一篇高分甚至是满分佳作。