Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last year,I went shopping in a department store.Little do I know that I was heading for a very new experience. While I was walking around the store,I happened to see the foreigner trying to explain herself with a salesman. Gathering her courage,I decided to step in and helped her explain herself.Fortunately,I could understand that she was talking about,so I just translated it into Chinese.

I felt glad for able to help her and talk with her.She said that she was a student like me and was touring China lonely.She told me about some experience she had touring the country.Although I won’t see her again,but it’s good to meet someone like her from another country.

Answer 1

【答案】1. do→did；2. the→a；3. with→to；4. her→my；5. helped→help；6. that→what；7. for后面加being；8. lonely→alone；9. experience→experiences；10. but去掉

【解析】1.考查动词。说的是last year（去年）的事情，要用一般过去时态，故将do改为did.

2.考查冠词。在句中可数名词foreigner（外国人）第一次出现，“一个外国人”，应该用不定冠词a，故将the改为a.

3.考查介词。固定词组：explain sth. to sb.（向某人解释某事），故将with改为to.

4.考查代词。此句是说我鼓足了我的勇气，决定上前帮忙，所以要物主代词my。故将her改为my.

5.考查动词。此处不定式help和to step并列作decided的宾语，共用了一个不定式符号，所以要用动词原形，故将helped改为help.

6.考查连词。宾语从句中，介词about后缺少宾语，要用连接代词what作宾语，故将that改为what.

7.考查动词。作介词for的宾语，要用动名词短语，故加being.

8.考查副词。lonely是指主观上感到孤独，而alone是指客观上一个人，此处是说她一个人在中国旅行。故将lonely改为alone.

9.考查名词。名词experience作为“经历”讲是可数名词；作为“经验”讲是不可数名词，此处是“经历”的意思，故将experience改为experiences.

10.考查连词。句中已经有Although 引导让步状语从句，不需要再用并列连词but，故将but去掉.