20.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I wish I can be an excellent cook when I grow up because I enjoy cooking but I want to bring happiness to people who taste my food.
I still remember clearly that happened when I cooked for the first time.I almost had my finger cutting when I cut onions and made a mess of the kitchen.Worse still,the dish I cooked tasted so terribly that I even thought about quitting.Thanks for my mother's encouragement and patient guidance,I continued practicing cook at home whenever I had time.It was then my cooking skills improved gradually.
I'll try my best to learn and improve my cooking skills in order that to make your dream a reality.And I believe I can make it!