Question

【题目】王明是红星中学高一年级的学生。进入高中后，不知怎样适应高中生活。请你以他好友的身份给他写一封建议信。
内容包括以下要点：
1).多与老师沟通交流；
2).积极参与班级活动，尽快融入集体中；
3).与志趣相投的同学交朋友；
要求：1).词数80~100次；
2).可适当发挥；
3).书写要规范。
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.
I hope you will find my advice useful.
Yours,
Zhang Jian

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Ming,

I'm sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.Firstly, the senior school life is different from the junior school life．Generally speaking, the teachers in senior school tend to adopt different teaching methods and they pay more attention to the ability training. Therefore, my suggestion is that you should adjust to their methods．Secondly, as senior students you are supposed to explore your own learning methods, for effective learning methods are mole important．If you know how to learn you will make full use of your spare time and make greater progress．

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Zhang Jian

【解析】这是一篇英文信件，要求考生给红星中学高一新生王明写一封建议信。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1).多与老师沟通交流；2).积极参与班级活动，尽快融入集体中；3).与志趣相投的同学交朋友。写作时要把所提示的点写全，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、适当使用并列连词，合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。