Question

高中生活是人一生中最美好的时光，除了学业之外，我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了在毕业前不留下遗憾，我们搞好备考复习的同时，是不是还该做点什么？请根据提示的要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。
l 向老师表示感谢
l 跟对你有误解的同学谈一谈
l 征求同学的宝贵意见
l 再为班级做件有意义的事
注意：
1．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
2．短文的单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）
High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework,
 there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no
regrets…________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

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High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my limited time to go over the lessons I’ve learned. At the same time, I’d like to show my gratitude to all the teachers who have given me so much help in the past three years. In addition, it’s necessary for me to have a talk with whoever might have misunderstood me, for I do care about the friendship between us. For the purpose of improving myself, I’ll ask my classmates for some advice which may be of great value to me. Last but not least, doing another good deed for my class is also my plan. With these things done, I will have no regrets in my high school life.

试题分析：这篇作文，要点和开头已经给出。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头及要点,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇，句型和语法，使文章显得更有文采。注意字数，100字左右。
点评：本文属于演讲稿类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。