Question

【题目】根据下列信息提示,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

提示:1.赵芳的父母进城打工;

2.赵芳和爷爷奶奶留守农村;

3.在学习上赵芳遇到了一些困难;

4.在老师和同学们的帮助下,她取得了进步。

要求:1.不要逐句翻译;

2.文中请勿使用真实的姓名、校名地名:

3.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Zhao Fang is my classmate, and her parents go to the city to work, so she lives with her grandparents. She missed her parents very much, and she was always dreaming in class. She often couldn’t finish her work on time. and thus she was left behind in studies. Our teachers were all worried about her. All our teachers and classmates held a discussion about how to improve her studies, and made a plan to help her. We all try our best. Now she has made great progress, and we feel very happy.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生根据所给信息写一篇短文。

第一步：总结所给信息。本篇书面表达要求考生根据所给信息写一篇短文，注意不能逐句翻译。根据所给信息可知，本篇短文是关于老师和同学帮助留守学生赵芳在学习上取得进步的故事。

第二步：列关键词。如：go to the city，on time，behind，be worried about，make a plan，try one’s best，make great progress等。

第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：so、thus、Now等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。