Question

18．你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛，话题是"畅想未来，享受欢乐"．请你用英语写一篇不少于120词的演讲稿．你可以从科技发展带给人们未来的生活、学习和工作的影响，以及如何迎接未来、适应新生活等方面展开描述和讨论．
注意：1、演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
  2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
Hello，everyone!I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here．
                                                                
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing，we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements．我们不但有足够的食物和衣服，我们还可以花更多的时间环游世界以及享受其他乐趣．
高分句型二：
Therefore，we should work harder today，making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world．因此，现在我们应该更努力的工作，随时为以后能为这个社会和时间做贡献而做准备．
句型一 Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing…该句是一个部分倒装句，not only..but also..连接并列从句，not only后面跟的从句应使用倒装句，将主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换．
句型二  making preparations to make more contributions to..此处使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语
除此以外，还有以下重要短语和固定用法：
thanks to     be full of    make contribution to   adapt to

解答 Hello，everyone!I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here． Thanks to the great development in science and technology，we are sure to live a happier and more wonderful life in the future．Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing，we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements．（高分句型一）It will make our spare time more interesting and colorful．Furthermore，we will have less stress either from our study or from the work since we can work more efficiently．However，our future life is not just full of amusement and joy，but also of challenge．Therefore，we should work harder today，making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world．（高分句型二）Only in this way can we adapt to the future life and enjoy ourselves when it comes．
That's all．Thank you!

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，该类书面表达要点明确，规定了考生的表述思路．写作时应将提纲中所列举的要点全部涉及，不能遗漏，语言表达明确，言简意赅．