Question

9．I traveled to Yellowstone National Park with my parents and uncles last week．We had a great fun there．My parents went to the park mainly because they longed see the beautiful natural scenery there．My uncle is a photographer，which was drawn to the national park by wildlife there．He wanted to take photographs of Yellowstone animals in its natural habitat．So how did I travel there？I traveled there because I like exploring and take adventures．It's said that you may come cross a bear there when you travel in the park．But we don't encounter one．To be frankly，it was a bit disappointing to me．

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了作者和父母还有叔叔去黄石公园游玩的经历．父母喜欢美丽的大自然，叔叔是位摄影师，想拍摄动物的栖息地，我喜欢探险．

解答 I traveled to Yellowstone National Park with my parents and uncles last week．We had a great fun there．My parents went to the park mainly because they longed∧see the beautiful natural scenery there．My uncle is a photographer，which was drawn to the national park by wildlife there．He wanted to take photographs of Yellowstone animals in its natural habitat．So how did I travel there？I traveled there because I like exploring and take adventures．It's said that you may come cross a bear there when you travel in the park． But we don't encounter one．To be frankly，it was a bit disappointing to me．
详解：
1．uncles改为uncle；名词错误．文章讲述的作者和一位叔叔去玩，要用单数．
2．a去掉；冠词错误．fun开心，抽象名词，不能与不定冠词连用；have great fun玩得很开心．
3．加to；考查动词短语．long to do sth渴望做某事．
4．which改为who；连词错误．句中关系词指代的先行词是人，要用who来引导．
5．its改为their；代词错误．句意指代的是animals，要用表示复数的形容词性物主代词．
6．how改为why；疑问词错误．句意表达的是原因，要用why来提问．
7．take改为taking；非谓语动词错误．句中take作like的宾语，和exploring构成并列，要用动名词形式．
8．cross改为across；短语搭配错误．come across遇到．
9．don't改为didn't；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，助动词要用一般过去时态．
10．frankly改为frank；形容词错误．句中frank作系动词的表语，要用形容词形式．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．