Question

【题目】书面表达

根据提示，写一篇建议信。假如你是某报编辑，昨天收到学生李华的来信。请根据来信的内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。

写作要点: 1. 真诚地与父母交流自己的真实感受：自己长大了,能处理自己的事情。

2. 正确对待父母的爱：理解父母，感激父母的爱

3. ……（至少再写一条自己的建议）

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。但不计入总词数；

Dear Li Hua,

I have read your letter. It is good that you feel grateful for your parents’ love. __________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I have read your letter. It is good that you feel grateful for your parents’ love. You know that most of teenagers at your age will experience the same worry with you. So don’t feel too worried and I’ll try to make some suggestions to help you.

First, I’d like to suggest that you should talk with your parents openly and politely, telling them you are old enough to deal with some of your own matters on your own. Also, you should understand your parents, appreciating them for their love, instead of refusing their help rudely. Finally, I think it would be a good idea that you try your best to do well in your study and other aspects. Only by doing this, will you let them know what you need is their belief and support .I believe your parents will finally understand you.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：the same with与..相同,feel grateful for感激,deal with解决,do well in做得好，on your own自己,instead of而不是,It is good that you feel grateful for your parents’ love形式主语.Only by doing this, will you let them know what you need is their belief and support倒装句和宾语从句,文章使用First,Also,Finally等过渡性连接词使文章更有条理性。