Question

随着网络在人们生活中的广泛使用，在生日或其他重大节日时，越来越多的好友或家人喜欢通过发送电子贺卡来表达他们的祝愿。根据以下提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点，并谈谈自己的看法。
使用便捷，传递速度快，不受时空限制；
形式多样，生动有趣；
节约资源，利于环保。
文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，字数100左右。
参考词汇：电子贺卡：e-card (electronic card)
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Answer 1

With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life, more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.
Compared with paper cards, electronic ones have many advantages. Firstly, it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well, without being limited by time and space. Secondly, they take various forms of motion pictures, music and so on, which is more interesting and lively. Most importantly, electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.
For me, due to reminders from QQ, I've never missed any chances to say "Happy birthday" to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards. I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

解析试题分析：题目要求根据所给的提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点并谈谈自己的看法。作文布局可以分三段，第一段总述现象；第二段写贺卡的优点；第三段写自己的观点。注意时态、人称、拼写、标点和语法的正确使用。
【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的短语more and more, on the occasions of, as well, For me, due to, far away等，使作文内容变得充实；
范文注意使用Firstly, Secondly, Most importantly来表示列举，使作文条理清晰、更有说服力；
范文使用的重要语法知识有：固定搭配both...and...；固定搭配tend to send...；with复合结构With the wide use of the Internet...；非谓语动词Compared with paper cards,定语从句which is more interesting and lively；强调句型it is just the Internet that...。语法知识的运用非常灵活。
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