分析 该作文是应用文.文章主题注意条理要清晰,逻辑顺序和结构要恰当,同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容,不拖泥带水.要注意题中所给的信息,不可偏题,应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的.尽量保持卷面整洁,字体美观,注意行文的连贯性.使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次.
【亮点说明】文章第一段第二句使用了一个宾语从句I am more than delighted to hear that a New Year party will be held for us Chinese overseas students.听到新年派对将是我们海外华人学生举办的,我高兴的不得了.第三句开头用了现在分词做状语.Being active and enthusiastic,由于我很活跃和热心.文章第二段第一句使用了一个while引导的时间状语从句. While I've seen the notice,I'd also like to know more about the party.当我看到告示,我也想要知道关于派对的更多事情.第二句是一个what引导的主语从句,其中的when和where并不是从句引导词,What confuses me first is when and where the party will be held and what kinds of activities we'll have at the party.最初让我感到疑惑的事是排队将会在什么时候和什么地点举行,并且我们在派对上将会有什么样的活动. 除了从句之外,文章中还用到了不少好的短语和精炼的结构.more than 不仅仅;fit for适合;not only…but also不仅…而且;have a good knowledge of精通…;both…and都;I‘d like to我愿意…;以及first…Additionally…finally 副词组成的分层说明的结构;sign up报名.
解答 Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China.I am more than delighted to hear that a New Year party will be held for us Chinese overseas students.Being active and enthusiastic,I think I'm fit for being a host.(高分句型 )Not only can I speak English fluently,but also I have a good knowledge of both Chinese and British customs.(高分句型)
While I've seen the notice,I'd also like to know more about the party.What confuses me first is when and where the party will be held and what kinds of activities we'll have at the party.(高分句型)Additionally,do you have any special requirements about clothes?Finally,I'd also like to know the deadline for signing up.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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