Question

【题目】某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。
参考词汇：图表chart词数：120字左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Chart1 shows the daily average amount of time the students spend on different after-class activities. On Chart 1，the students put most of their time －93 minutes－into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.

As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. Only in this way, can they be healthier and more energetic.

【解析】本文属于图表作文。图表式作文是说明文的一种，这类作文要求学生通过图表中所给数据和提示内容写一短文，属于比较、对照类。通常这种文章采取三段式写法。第一段，描述图表，得出结论。本题有两个图表，要弄清楚这两幅图表分别是展示什么内容，本题第一幅柱状图是学生每天主要课余活动及所用时间，第二幅饼状图则是反映各项课余活动所占用学生课余活动的时间。第二段，对数字进行仔细的比较、分析归纳、总结。第三段就是针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。

【亮点说明】文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：daily average amount of，which引导的非限制性定语从句，While状语从句和As shown省略句等都很不错。

在描述图1时运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句（…, which takes up 46 minutes.）和While状语从句（While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.）。同时运用一些高级的短语和句式。如：daily average amount of，take uo …,

在描述图 2中，本段中三句话运用了三种句式。本段中运用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句（As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.）；宾语从句（I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class.）及一个由only+状语置于句首的部分倒装句（Only in this way, can they be healthier and more energetic.）完美结束。本段内容虽短，句式最为复杂。