Question

短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Whatever the situation, the best advice is to obey the Golden Rule： treat others as you would like to be treated.

注意: ①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As the saying goes, “Treat others as you would like to be treated.” If we want to be treated well, we should treat others well too.

Two years ago, I was admitted to high school. Ranking first in my class, I felt proud and superior. Therefore, I dreamed about being admired and treated well everywhere, and I always looked down upon my classmates who turned to me in their studies. One day, Xiao Ming asked me to help him work out a math problem. I glanced at it, and said, “So easy, how foolish you are!” On hearing it, he said angrily, “I won’t ask you again and many classmates have fed up with your arrogance.” I was shocked. Only then did I realize why I was so unpopular with my classmates. From then on, I tried to treat them equally and helped them with all my heart. Time going by, I got along with them much better.

Keep in mind that we’d better treat others the way we would like to be treated.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

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考点： 提纲类作文