Question

【题目】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多于的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（ 从第11处起）不计分。

Jim,

I am pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you some changes in my school.

You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is no longer that it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new building have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Therefore, my school is well equipped about sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What’s more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】written→writing

【2】去掉taken前面的been

【3】that→what

【4】were→was

【5】building→buildings

【6】in后面的it→which

【7】Therefore→Besides

【8】about→with

【9】had→have

【10】school ∧ become加will

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍了作者学校的一些变化。

【1】written→writing 句意：我正写信告诉你在我学校的一些变化。故把written改为writing。

【2】去掉taken前面的been take place意为“发生，举行”。此短语相当于不及物动词，没有被动语态，故去掉have been taken place中的been。

【3】that→what 句意：它不再是三年前的样子了。此句中的表语从句缺少引导词，从句be动词后缺少表语，而that只起连接作用，不作成分，根据句意故把that改为what。

【4】were→was 此处是there be句型，遵循就近一致原则；主语是only one teaching building and a playground，故谓语动词和and前的only one teaching building保持一致，故把were改为was。

【5】building→buildings 前面有two修饰，故后面名词用复数形式，故把building 改为buildings。

【6】in后面的it→which a new classroom building是先行词，指物，故把in后面的it改成which。

【7】Therefore→Besides 句意：除此之外，我的学校装备有体育设施和音乐设备。根据句意可知，此处表示递进关系，故把Therefore改为Besides。

【8】about→with 固定词组：be equipped with用……装备，故把about改为with。

【9】had→have 句意：我们在学校内外种了许多树和花。文章的主体时态是现在时，故这里用现在完成时态，故把had改为have。

【10】school ∧ become加will 句意：我认为我的学校将变得越来越好。根据句意可知，用一般将来时态，故在school ∧ become加will。

【知识拓展】

浅谈英语的“发生”——下面的单词或短语都无被动语态

happen偶然发生/take place举行，举办（有计划。安排）/come about形成、产生）/occur发生，出现，想起/break out（火山、地震、战争）的突然爆发。This story happened in 2012.故事发生在2012。