Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Miss Kate,

I learned from the newspaper that you’re looking for an English teacher for our school. I am writing to you to apply of the teaching position and I believe I am the right person you are looking for.

Firstly, allow me to introducing myself. My name is Li Hua, and I am an eighteen-year-old girl. I had just graduated from high school but taken the University Entrance Examination. I have a good command of English and I have gone to America study English for two years. However, I am a very patient person and love the children very much. I’m sure I’ll do a good job if I’m accepted.

I sincerely hope you can give me a chance. I am looked forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

1.our→ your

2.of→ for

3.introducing → introduce

4.had → have

5.but → and

6.gone → been

7.study 前加to

8.However → Besides /Moreover / Additionally

9.去掉children 前的the

10.looked → looking

【解析】

1.our→ your 考查代词。句意：我从报纸上了解到你们学校在寻找英语老师；

2.of→ for 考查介词 wait for 等待。

3.introducing → introduce 考查动词的用法。Allow sb to do sth允许做某事；

4.had → have 考查动词的时态。句意：我已经从高中毕业 ，用现在完成时。

5.but → and 考查连词。句意：我已从高中毕业且参加高考；两个句子并列关系；

6.gone → been 考查动词用法。Have been to 去过某地又回来了；have gone to 去了某地，没有回来 ；

7.study 前加to 考查动词的用法。句意：我去美国学习英语二年，表示目的；

8.However → Besides /Moreover / Additionally 考查副词，句意：况且，我还是个有耐心的人并且很喜欢孩子；

9.去掉children 前的the 考查冠词。Love children喜欢孩子表示泛指，the children这些孩子表示特指，

10.looked → looking 考查动词的用法。Look forward to 加名词或动名词，盼望做某事；

考点：短文改错；