Question

【题目】毕业季也是感恩季。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你在高中三年所遇到的人或事物写一封感谢信，信的内容包括：

1.感谢的人或事物；

2.感谢的原因；

3.你的美好愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Samantha,

I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher. From day one, I enjoyed each and every class of yours. You could always make your lessons informative, educational and enjoyable all at the same time. Every day I looked forward to your class, which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English. It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself. I enjoyed everything you taught us, from the English language to American culture. The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds, and it simply makes my mouth water.

You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories. You are a great inspiration to us all!

A big and warm “Thank you!” from your beloved student! May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。针对毕业季同学们各自离别，要互相写信来表示感谢。文章的内容已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意一下几个方面：

感谢的事情是过去发生的，要以过去时来写；

文章所需要的内容一定要齐全，但不能出现堆列文字的现象。可以适当的运用衔接词，使文章在衔接上自然流畅。

文章主题内容是以记叙文为主，一定要符合事件发生的合理性，符合文章所要表达的内容。

【范文亮点】

优秀的词汇和短语：From day one 从一开始，A big and warm “Thank you!”非常感谢，looked forward to 期待

精彩句式：It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself.这里运用了强调句和定语从句，突出强调了“我”对于老师的感恩之情。更具有感情色彩。

May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!

在文章结尾对于老师的祝福别具一格，一改以往书信祝福身体健康的说法，而是写出的是对于老师事业的祝福。