Question

12．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．This is Li Hua from Senior Three．I'm here today to share with you a good lesson from an overseas Chinese student living in Germany．It is a true story．
After years of hard work，this Chinese student graduated with amazing academic achievements．Everyone thought he was going to get a good job easily and have a bright future．But to his disappointment，he was not even allowed the chance for an interview!The third time he was turned down，he couldn't help telephoning the company to ask why they didn't want him．The answer was simple．"We don't hire dishonest people in Germany．"
What was wrong you might wonder？The truth is，shortly after he arrived in Germany，this clever student found that it was easy to skip buying subway tickets．So，to save money，he often went without a ticket．As a result，he had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times．
From this story，we learn that we may get short-term benefits by dishonest means，but the truth will come out sooner or later and the cost is high．So remember：honesty is the best policy．
That's all for my speech．Thank you!
写作内容
1．以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容；
2．然后以约120个词写一篇读后感，说明"诚信的重要性"，内容包括：
（1）你读后的感受；
（2）以你或他人的经历说明；
（3）谈谈你从中悟出的道理．
写作要求
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：speak of （提及，谈及），because of （因为），throw away （扔掉），a promising future（有前途的未来），having trouble doing sth（做某事有困难），work out（解出），come across（偶遇），fail the test（考试失败），in the short-term（从短期角度看），in the long-term（从长期角度看），revise sth （修改，修订某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．Li Hua spoke of an overseas Chinese student who couldn't find a job because of his dishonesty．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"an overseas Chinese student"．
【高分句型二】
2．After reading this speech，I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work，great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the student"．
【高分句型三】
3．But when he came across a similar question in the final exam，he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test．
此处是由连词"when"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test"．
【高分句型四】
4．①While dishonesty helped him in the short-term during the quiz，it hurt him in the long-term ②because he didn't revise that type of problem for the final exam．
①此处是由连词"While"引导的让步状语从句，意为"虽然，尽管"主句为"it hurt him in the long-term"．
②此处是由连词"because"引导的原因状语从句，主句为"it hurt him in the long-term"．

解答 In this speech，Li Hua spoke of an overseas Chinese student who couldn't find a job because of his dishonesty．The story shows us that honesty really is the best policy．【高分句型一】
（概括）
        After reading this speech，I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work，great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits．【高分句型二】Now，he knows better than anyone that dishonesty costs dearly．（感受）
       My classmates Wang Tao once made a similar mistake．During a math quiz，he was having trouble working out a problem．When the teacher looked away，he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate．He was glad that he had a high mark in the quiz．But when he came across a similar question in the final exam，he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test．【高分句型三】
（以他人的经历说明）
   While dishonesty helped him in the short-term during the quiz，it hurt him in the long-term because he didn't revise that type of problem for the final exam．【高分句型四】
I shall always remember this lesson and be an honest person．（个人观点--道理）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．