Question

针对目前高三学生学习压力较大的现状，有人以“Effective Ways to Release the Stress”为题于上周调查采访了五个学校的500名高三学生。请你根据以下调查结果的图表写一份报告，并再谈谈自己或身边同学释放压力的有效方法。
参考词汇：心理咨询室the psychological consulting office
Effective Ways to Release the Stress
Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies. ……

Answer 1

Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies. In order to find out effective ways to release the stress, a survey was made last week in five schools. Altogether 500 students were interviewed, and some interesting results were as follows: About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports. They play football, for instance. Meanwhile, another forty—five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music. Interestingly, the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office.
When I’m stressed, I usually do lots of physical exercise such as walking around our school playground quickly for about one hour to get myself tired at night. I find it useful for me because I’ll have a good sleep then. In this way, I’ll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries.

试题分析：本文是一篇看图作文，同时也是议论文。讨论的中心话题是释放压力的有效方法。在表格里主要提及了三种方法：踢足球，听音乐以及找心理医生。要点：1. 高三学生学习压力较大；2. 上周调查采访了五个学校的500名高三学生；3.调查后建议采取的三种方法；4.周围同学的减压方法（不同的人又不同的方法）。图表类作文对于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很强的审题能力，能根据图表在脑海里勾勒出故事发生的始末，考生的思维量是非常大的。然后根据图表内容组织要点，要注意要点的完整性，不能有遗漏。在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的运用不落俗套，如meanwhile, interestingly。状语从句的运用相对较多，如Altogether 500 students were interviewed,和When I’m stressed。