Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A recent survey shows most students often communicate with their parents, and there are still some who think it embarrassed to share their ideas with them. Actually everyone should attach important to family communication. It strengthens the bond（关系） of the family and bridge the gap between children and parents. In addition to, sharing your personal problems and emotions will great help reduce the pressure on you and build up our confidence.

As for my family, we had a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over which everyone present takes turns to sharing one problem while the others try to suggest solutions. In this way whole family can enjoy every single bit of life.

Answer 1

【答案】1.and改成but 2.embarrassed改成embarrassing 3.important改成importance 4.bridge改成bridges 5.去掉to 6.great改成greatly 7.our改成your 8.had改成have 9.sharing改成share 10.whole前加the

【解析】1.句意：最新调查显示多数学生经常和父母交流，但是仍然有一些认为和父母分享想法是令人尴尬的。此处是转折关系，故把and改成but。

2.句意：但是仍然有一些认为和父母分享想法是令人尴尬的。根据句意可知把embarrassed改成embarrassing。

3.固定搭配：attach importance to对---给予重视，故把important改成importance。

4.句意：它增强了家庭的纽带，缩小了孩子与父母之间的之间的差距。bridge在此处是动词，“架桥”，句子是一般现在时态，主语是单数第三人称，故把bridge改成bridges。

5. In addition to除---之外；In addition 另外，此外。因为此处是逗号，故应该是In addition，所以去掉to。

6. 此处help是动词，副词修饰动词，故把great改成greatly。

7.句意：情感将帮助减少你的压力，增强你的信心。故把our改成your。

8.根据every Saturday evening可知句子用一般现在时态，故把had改成have。

9.固定搭配：takes turns to do sth.轮流去做某事，故把sharing改成share。

10.the whole family整个家庭，故在whole前加the。