Question

假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营(summer camp)，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括：

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；

3.希望获准。

注意：

1.词数100左右：

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

Regards,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求写一封电子邮件申请参加国际中学生组织在新加坡举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【亮点说明】I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.这句话用了同位语从句， I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.这句话用了并列句和宾语从句， I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. 这句话里面的as well是比较高级的词组，I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.这里be accepted as词组，还有了What is more,这样的词组可以使句与句之间更连贯。

考点：考查书信类书面表达