Question

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

         You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.  The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.

注意：①文章开头已给出，无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

         Some of our daily behaviors reflect our attitude towards life.  What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Some of our daily behaviors reflect our attitude towards life.  What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present. To change our daily routine is the first step to get access to success.

When I was a middle school student, I found maths boring and tough to learn. So every time I met with a difficult problem. I would skip it and do what was easy to me. As time went by, I was consequently left behind others and even failed the exam. Having been taught a lesson, I made up my mind to change my attitude towards maths and develop a good habit of working out any problems I met no matter how tough they are. Step by step, I caught up with others. With my grades increasing steadily, it turned out that I became a student who was good at maths rather than poor at it.

What I have learnt from my own experience is that our daily routines can influence the way we will go in store. Even a small habit can destroy the base of success. Let’s change our bad habits and employ correct attitude, and what is waiting for us is our days of brilliance.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作：开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的英语提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要结合提示内容列出文章的提纲，这篇文章的话题是通过日常的生活变化导致成功，要找出文章论述的几点要点，还有结合实际情况说明。选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】So every time I met with a difficult problem. I would skip it and do what was easy to me. 这句话是every time引导的时间状语从句，what引导的是宾语从句，As time went by, I was consequently left behind others and even failed the exam. 这是as引导的时间状语从句，Having been taught a lesson, I made up my mind to change my attitude towards maths and develop a good habit of working out any problems I met no matter how tough they are. 这句话是非谓语动词做状语，和no matter how引导的让步状语从句， With my grades increasing steadily这是with的复合结构， it turned out that I became a student who was good at maths rather than poor at it.这是固定句型， What I have learnt from my own experience is that our daily routines can influence the way we will go in store. 这句话既有主语从句也有表语从句，

考点：考查开放式作文