Question

11．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
●对两堂绘画课的具体描述；

●你从中获得的启发．
Date：June 8，2012
　　Last week，I visit two painting classes at a primary school．In one class a student called Amy dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints．By contrast，the same student used a brush to make a beautiful landscape painting．
　　The two paintings both intrigued me．They reminded me of a famous saying"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．"The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
　　Success needs more than being simply down-to-earth，which also need dreams．The second painting embodied the reach of our dreams．Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．
　　So we should dream big and act small．Only by doing so，can we really make our dream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 根据文章要求--写感想，可知为议论文．
时间为"上周一"，可以推测时态为一般过去时为主．写作人称为第一人称．
本题为开放类作文，考生根据图画写出绘画课给自己的启发即可．答案不唯一．

重要短语及句型：
intrigue sb 激发某人的兴趣
dip one's feet in sp 把脚扎进某处
by contrast 相反地
down-to-earth 脚踏实地的，实际的
embody  v．体现；使…具体化
gleam   n．光芒
Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．
脚踏实地，仰望星空．

高分句型：
一、The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
第一幅画表示我们应该脚踏实地，警惕被一时的成功冲昏头脑．
本句包含了that引导的宾语从句that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
二、Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．
不要忽视我们心中的小火星，如果我们有足够的信念，相信"星星之火可以燎原"．
instead of…为方式状语，of为介词，后加动名词．

解答 Date：June 8，2012
　　Last week，I visit two painting classes at a primary school．In one class a student called Amy dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints．By contrast，the same student used a brush to make a beautiful landscape painting．（叙述上周发生的事情）
　　The two paintings both intrigued me．They reminded me of a famous saying"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．"The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．【高分句型一】（脚踏实地的重要性）
　　Success needs more than being simply down-to-earth，which also need dreams．The second painting embodied the reach of our dreams．Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．【高分句型二】（保持梦想的重要性）
　　So we should dream big and act small．Only by doing so，can we really make our dream come true．（总结）

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅．考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．