Question

16．I'm a thin girl sitting in the examination hall among my classmates with a sheet of questions in front of me．The only difference between my classmates and me is that they are all busy filling out their sheets，while I am just sitting，staring at the wall in front of me．
  With no words coming to my rescue，I helplessly glance down at the title of the essay："My Father"．
  Since I do not have a clear impressionof him，I can only describe him on the basis of what I have heard from my mother and other relatives．They all told me that he was caring，hard-working，a man of his word and did everything to keep his family happy．They stopped talking about him as suddenly as he disappeared from our lives．He went to work one day and never returned．My mother ran from hospitals to police station and even to mortuaries （太平间） but found no trace of him．He was gone as if he never existed．
  While growing up I gradually knew he was taken away by security forces because he was against the state．I do not know how far that is true．He was an ordinary manworking day in and day out to make ends meet and put food on our table．He was hardly concerned about the state of affairs in Pakistan．
  I understand that my teachers are probably expecting me to writeflowery words about him but how I can be expected to write about a man who never existed．Perhaps，it would be unfair to say he never existed．He still does in my memories．He was a fruit businessman and owned a shop．Every evening he would return from work with dates （枣） or sweets，and his hands were never empty．I also remember that he took me to the Koh-eMuras once； he told me that this was a very sacred （神圣的） place，asking me to fold my hands and ask Allah for whatever I wanted．I remember folding my hands and praying hard for every day to be a happy day．
注意：
1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右．
2、应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语．
3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好．
4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
    Ever since I have lost him，I have been faced with a deep sense of loss-a feeling which is
difficult for me to describe in words．______________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
   Strangely，I am just as hopeful as I am angry．_____________________________________

Answer 1

分析 本文为文段续写．
材料中文段所提供的主要内容是：考试时"我"要写一篇关于"父亲"的作文．"我"看到其他同学都在试卷上很快地写着，然而，"我"却不知道怎么写，"我"无法写"不存在的人"．"我"父亲在巴基斯坦几乎从不关心国事，然而有一天却因为"反政府"的名义被带走，以后再没回来．"我"回忆了很小的时候和父亲的点滴时光．他是个水果店店主，每天回家都会带些枣及糖果，他教"我"读《古兰经》…
续写部分有两段，且已有开头，而且要求用上原文段5个以上有下划线的词语：an ordinary man，expecting me to write，existed，return，dates，praying．
写作主题可以为：表达"我"失去父亲后又愤怒又期待的感想（I am just as hopeful as I am angry，续写第二段的首句为过渡句，概括了续写第一段与第二段的内容．）
续写要点可以为：1，失去父亲后"我"的失落感及表现；2，"我"的期盼与愤怒一样深，表达我的思念．

解答 Ever since I have lost him，I have been faced with a deep sense of loss-a feeling which is difficult for me to describe in words．I wish I hadn't known the truth or my life were not different but as normal as that of the other girls sitting around me in this examination hall．This sense gives me headache and makes me jump from envy to severe hate．I dislike the girls who are taken by their fathersto school； I hate children who are talking proudly about bed time stories read by their fathers．These events constantly remind me of his absence and how different my life is from other girls of my age．
    Strangely，I am just as hopeful as I am angry．Every knock on the door fills me with expectation．I immediately picture him walking through the door，a box of dates in his hands．Families get together and talk about good times in my house．When we get together，we all gather in front of the television praying to catch a glance o f his face．I follow every bit of news that could be connected with his disappearance．Most days I wish for his safe return．（166 words）

点评 本文写作难度较大．本文为续写，需要基于原来文段的基础上进行延伸，而且有使用词语的限制，需要发挥考生的想象力．原文段交代了原因，续写文段由所提供的首句可知主要是表达自己又愤怒又期待的感想．
考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．