Question

书面表达（30分）
目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。

注意：1. 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；2. 词数：120左右。hospital discharge (出院)
From the picture, we can see that_________________________________________
                                                                   

Answer 1

                        Health Care
From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldn’t stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford． It’s really another heart attack for him.
At present, many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. Worse still, some have to wait for the last day of their life.
We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced． The government should build up a favorable medical system. Everyone could enjoy their life as long as possible.

解析看图写作应分两个部分，第一段的描写图画内容，第二段是重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。在第一段中要准确的描写图画，得了心脏病的老人看到高额的费用吓得晕倒，再分析原因现象：目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。第二段要给出建议的解决办法和理由，写作时要适当运用复杂句：如：It was beyond what he could afford． It’s really another heart attack for him.这是what引导的宾语从句。另外还要注意关联词，象Worse still,等词的运用。